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@G has responded to some feedback for shaewoo
supporting the idea but - there's way too much copy - it feels like an essay - get rid of at least 50% of your copy. Clarity is needed - what's your product - how it works - why we should use it - pricing - faq, credentials etc
shaewooThank you, this was exactly the push we needed. We’ve cut the homepage copy by more than half and rebuilt it in the order you suggested: what Shaewoo is, how it works in three steps, why to use it, pricing, a short FAQ and credentials. Would love your take on the new version at shaewoo.com.
Anonymous
yes - it looks way better, thank you but hero is still very crowded. Try to remove more Point it at a collection and get a video for every product, made from the photos and words already on your listings. No filming, editing or writing. -> this could be a one sentence, better inspiring one A Shopify shop's address brings in its products.. make it one sentence our first 10 videos are free. · No card. · No code. · Any shop, or a spreadsheet. -> present it better
